On the 13 of August 1698, we were flying a plane called Pink Ladies. The flight number was Flight 19 for the US air force. We were flying from Jamaica to Miami. Then something did not feel right. The plane started to shake and we were getting turbulence. These dark stormy clouds were in the distance, the clouds were getting bigger, not because we were getting closer, they actually were getting bigger. Then I looked at my map, it wasn't working and I was getting so worried. The plane was heading into the clouds. It felt like it was endless. I had never been more scared in my life. After hours I finally got out of it. When we got out I contacted air traffic control, they said that we weren't on the ATC radar. But we were in Miami's air space. Then everything got suspiciosus. We landed with all of this green moss stuff all over the plane. The airport staff called the airport police to come inspect the plane when we touched down. It was weird. I had done this route lots of times and nothing weird has ever happened. The ATC controller and I were talking for hours about what happened. A few hours later we found out that we went over the Bermuda Triangle.
Friday, August 13, 2021
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Hi Ethan, That's a bit of a freaky story! Great job using some interesting words and your excellent punctuation made the story really easy to read. Is this based on a true account of the Bermuda Triangle or did you make it up? - Mrs Hobbs
ReplyDeleteHey Ethan, what a creative story. I loved the part where moss had accumulated on the aeroplane. It was great to see that you have re-read your work and edited parts that did not make sense. Keep up the good work.
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